senryu #1, #2, and #3

the days march along
flying faster as they pass
till I breathe my last

when my life’s time ends
will my soul find contentment
or haunt night’s sloe gloom

eternal unrest
is that what my death will bring
or an aught of peace

©2021 KT Workman

(Note: Japanese Senryu—Contains 3 lines, 17 syllables. 1st line, 5 syllables; 2nd line,7 syllables; 3rd line 5 syllables. Subject matter usually the human condition. There are three related senyrus posted here.)

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5 thoughts on “senryu #1, #2, and #3

    1. Thank you, J. I recently took an online poetry writing class, and was amazed at how many forms there are. I thought some people would like knowing how a poem should be structured, according to it’s form.

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